From 88a74259a1ae9852b8743cb3c3ecb14592da6a91 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: jrtechs <jeffery@jrtechs.net>
Date: Sun, 22 Oct 2017 20:28:33 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Edits to projects descriptions

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@@ -243,8 +243,11 @@
                   <h2>Pioneer Malting Employee Website</h2>
                   <hr class="star-primary">
                   <img class="img-fluid img-centered" src="img/portfolio/pioneer.png" alt="">
-                  <p>Over the course of several months I built a web application for pioneer malting which kept track of inventory, clients, payroll hours, orders, batches, and shipments.
-                    This website was built using PHP, SQL, HTML, and CSS. I currently host and maintain this website on my personal linux server.
+                  <p>Over several months I built a web application for pioneer malting which kept track of inventory, clients, payroll hours,
+                    orders, batches, and shipments.
+                    This website was built using PHP, SQL, HTML, and CSS.
+                    With the source code being well over ten thousand lines long, it has pushed me towards refining my coding conventions and version control
+                    to an art. I currently host and maintain this website on my personal linux server.
                    </p>
                   <ul class="list-inline item-details">
                     <li>Client:
@@ -295,8 +298,8 @@
                   <h2>Hoffends Employee Website</h2>
                   <hr class="star-primary">
                   <img class="img-fluid img-centered" src="img/portfolio/hoffends.png" alt="">
-                  <p> This website was built using PHP, SQL and HTML and keeps track of employee hours for payroll. I also built an android app which interfaces with this website so that
-                    employees can conveniently clock in/out with a tablet when they arrive at work.
+                  <p> This is a PHP website that keeps track of employee hours for payroll. I also built an android app which interfaces with this website so
+                    employees can conveniently clock in/out with an android tablet when they arrive at work.
                   </p>
                   <ul class="list-inline item-details">
                     <li>Client:
@@ -316,6 +319,12 @@
                       <strong>
                         <a href="https://www.w3schools.com/html/">HTML</a>
                       </strong>
+                      <strong>
+                        <a href="https://www.w3schools.com/html/">Android App Development</a>
+                      </strong>
+                      <strong>
+                        <a href="https://www.w3schools.com/html/">Java</a>
+                      </strong>
                       <strong>
                         <a href="https://www.w3schools.com/sql/">SQL</a>
                       </strong>
@@ -383,11 +392,12 @@
             <div class="row">
               <div class="col-lg-8 mx-auto">
                 <div class="modal-body">
-                  <h2>Junior year(High School) Group project</h2>
+                  <h2>Java Tanks Game</h2>
                   <hr class="star-primary">
                   <img class="img-fluid img-centered" src="img/portfolio/tanks.png" alt="">
-                  <p>Usually in AP classes in high school after the exam in May you do nothing. However, during my junior year of high school I took it upon myself to teach my AP programming class java GUIs -
-                  something not covered in the curriculum. After teaching the class several lessons, we started making a tanks game - using git for version control.</p>
+                  <p>Usually in high school AP classes after the final exam in May you have nothing to do in June. However, during my junior year of high school
+                    I took it upon myself to teach my AP programming class java GUIs -
+                  something not covered in the curriculum. After personally teaching the class several lessons, we started making a tanks game - using git for version control.</p>
                   <ul class="list-inline item-details">
                     <li>Date:
                       <strong>
@@ -426,7 +436,7 @@
                   <h2>Musical Floppy Drives</h2>
                   <hr class="star-primary">
                   <img class="img-fluid img-centered" src="img/portfolio/floppy.jpg" alt="">
-                  <p>Being somebody that just happens to have 10 floppy drives laying around in my room, I decided to make something with them. As the title suggests, I wired 8 floppy drives
+                  <p>Being somebody that happens to posses 10 floppy drives, I decided to make something with them. As the title suggests, I wired 8 floppy drives
                    to a raspberry pi to play music off them.</p>
                   <ul class="list-inline item-details">
                     <li>Date:
@@ -472,8 +482,8 @@
                   <h2>Quotes Website for a Friend</h2>
                   <hr class="star-primary">
                   <img class="img-fluid img-centered" src="img/portfolio/quotes.png" alt="">
-                  <p>In high school my friend had a static web page where he posted quotes that people said. During a winter break I decided amp up his project and
-                  create a dynamic website in PHP that would display the quotes on pictures of pandas. Along with displaying quotes this website also has a web forum where
+                  <p>In high school my friend had a static web page where he posted quotes that people said. During winter break I decided amp up his project and
+                  create a dynamic website in PHP that would display the quotes on pictures of pandas. Along with displaying quotes, this website also has a web forum where
                   registered users can submit new quotes.</p>
                   <ul class="list-inline item-details">
                     <li>Date: