Finished final draft of the Maker Faire post.

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 ![Rochester Maker Faire RITlug table.](media/makerFaire/20181117_091159.jpg)
 
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 # Introduction
 A few weeks ago I presented my [musical floppy drives](https://jrtechs.net/projects/musical-floppy-drive-build-log)
 at the [Rochester Maker Faire](https://rochester.makerfaire.com/) with [RITlug](https://ritlug.com/). 
-Wow, that sentence had a total of three links-- you should check them out:) This post is a 
-quick recap of the event and a project update for my Musical floppy drive project. For those of you who 
-don't know, Maker Faires are community gatherings where people "celebrate arts, crafts, engineering, science projects and the Do-It-Yourself (DIY) mindset".
+Wow, that sentence had a ton of links-- you should check them out. This post is a 
+quick recap of my experience at the Maker Faire and a project update for my musical floppy drive project. For those of you who 
+don't know, [Maker Faires](https://makerfaire.com/) are community gatherings where people "celebrate arts, crafts, 
+engineering, science projects and the Do-It-Yourself (DIY) mindset".
+
+I would like to give a huge thanks to [Christian](https://ctmartin.me/)
+ for providing me with some of these pictures and [RITlug](https://ritlug.com/)
+for giving me the opportunity to present at the Maker Faire. 
 
 # Project Background
 
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-I currently have 10 floppy drives stacked together in a tower like structure so that it is easier to take to places
-like the Maker Faire and Imagine RIT. 
+I currently have 10 floppy drives stacked together in a tower like structure to make it easier to take to places
+like the Maker Faire and [Imagine RIT](https://www.rit.edu/imagine/). 
 
 ![Rochester Maker Faire RITlug table.](media/makerFaire/20181117_092417.jpg)
 
 # Future Project Upgrades
 
-Although the 10 floppy drives are quite loud in a single room, people typically found it difficult to hear at the
+Although the 10 floppy drives are quite loud in a small room, people typically found it difficult to hear at the
 Maker Faire. This was largely due to the noisiness of the hundreds of people at the convention center. To fix this
 in the future I want to bring a small amplifier for the floppy drives. 
 
 The second improvement which I plan on making is creating some form of web application where people can 
-request music for the floppy drives to play.
+request music for the floppy drives to play. The potential down side of this is that it is often difficult connecting
+to the internet at conventions.
+
+I have a ton of old IDE hard drives that I plan on incorporating into my musical orchestra. The tricky part of that
+upgrade would be to somehow incorporate those into my current floppy drive structure so that it is easy to take places.
+ My current plan is to have the hard drives completely separate from the floppy drives and run it on its own Arduino board. 
 
 # Cool Projects at the Maker Faire
 
-Although there were a ton of really cool projects at the Maker Faire, I did not have the time to spend a lot of
-time exploring the faire and taking pictures of everything. However, I want to share two really cool projects
-that I saw at the Maker Faire. 
+Although there were a ton of really cool projects at the Maker Faire, I did not have the time explore everything 
+and take a lot of pictures. However, I want to share some of the really cool projects that I saw at the Maker Faire. 
 
 ## HatChan
 
 ![HatChan](media/makerFaire/20181117_095844.jpg)
 
-This is a project that one person is calling HatChan. This is a hat equipped with a ton of LED lights, and 
+This is a project that one person is calling "HatChan". This is a hat equipped with a ton of LED lights, and 
 a fully functioning wireless access point. When you connect to his access point, the captcha portal takes you
 to a 4chan esk site where you can upload pictures -- mostly memes.
 
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 ![Rochester Maker Faire](media/makerFaire/20181117_120948.jpg)
 
 This one person brought a home made 8-bit computer to the Maker Faire. What I find the most impressive
-about this project was that the person who made it is only a sophomore in high school. 
+about this project was that the person who made it was only a sophomore in high school. 
+
+## Foss@Magic
+
+![Rochester Maker Faire](media/makerFaire/MVIMG_20181117_151211.jpg)
+*Photo provided by [Christian](https://ctmartin.me/)*
+
+FOSS@Magic is a organization at RIT which aims to promote
+free and open source software-- i'm also a part of this group. This year the FOSS group demoed their colorful MAGIC letters. On 
+a tablet beneath the letters, there is a web site open where you can select the color of each individual
+RGB letter. 
+
+## RITlug
+
+![Rochester Maker Faire](media/makerFaire/MVIMG_20181117_151247.jpg)
+*Photo provided by [Christian](https://ctmartin.me/)*
+
+The RIT Linux Users Group (RITlug) is a student-led organization aimed to promote and teach students about Linux and open source.
+This year we presented my Floppy Drive project, a Raspberry Pi [Lakka](https://www.raspberrypi.org/magpi/easy-retro-gaming-lakka/) gaming set up, a
+[Magic Mirror](https://github.com/MichMich/MagicMirror), and [Tiger OS](https://ritlug.com/tigeros).