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-                        I am currently a third year Computer Science student at Rochester Institute of Technology.
-                        I am a very outgoing person who loves collaborating and working with others.
-                        Check out my <a href="https://github.com/jrtechs">GitHub</a>, blog posts, and project websites to see what I have been working on.
+                        I am a self-proclaimed geek; I have been programming since I salvaged parts to build a computer when I was in 6th grade. Computers are my lifeblood; when I am not building software, I enjoy photography, running, reading, and cooking. 
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-                        I am a self proclaimed geek; I have been programming since I salvaged parts to build a computer when I was in 6th grade.
-                        Computers are my lifeblood. When I am not programming - or reading - I enjoy excising and riding my bike.
+                        I am a fifth-year Computer Science student at the Rochester Institute of Technology. Check out my <a href="https://github.com/jrtechs">GitHub</a>, blog posts, and project websites to see what software and I've been cooking up. My current interests are in graph data, web scraping, machine learning, computer vision, and open-source software.
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-                        JrTechs is a simple personal blog where I write articles on topics that I find interesting.
-                        This blog covers everything from project write-ups to tutorials on complex machine learning algorithms.
+                        JRTechs is a personal blog where I write about everything from projects to tutorials on sophisticated machine learning algorithms. If you want to stay up to date with new posts, subscribe to my <a href="https://jrtechs.net/rss">RSS feed</a>. 
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-                        This site was initially started as a simple HTML site back in 2014 when I was first learning about web development.
-                        This website has gone through <b>a lot</b> of changes since it was initially created in 2014.
-                        Currently the site is a custom <a href="https://expressjs.com/">Express</a> application which uses <a href="https://pandoc.org/">Pandoc</a> to render <a href="https://www.latex-project.org/">Latex</a>/Markdown files as HTML documents.
+                        This site initially started as a static HTML site in 2014 when I was first learning the ropes of web development. Since then, this site has undergone massive changes as I expanded my web development skills. 
+                        Currently the site is a custom <a href="https://expressjs.com/">Express</a> application which uses <a href="https://pandoc.org/">Pandoc</a> to render <a href="https://www.latex-project.org/">Latex</a> and Markdown files as HTML documents. This site has its very own admin portal to manage posts and has even expanded to include: customizable downloads, photography galleries, nested static websites, and static content for miscellaneous events.
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